haiku poem 2
hail
loud hail overnight
three times woken eyes open
finger nails tapping
going out daylight
fast hail spots grass hat coat white
ice woman moving
cold outside hail wind
hard ice unceasing descent
front door home again
warm inside look out
watch storm black sky develops
gravel thrown at glass
18 comments:
So glad I'm not THERE!! Warm and sunny here in S. Tx! Great poem.
I love the brevity of haiku. For me it sums up the clarity and simplicity of Japanese thingummy-wotsit. ...and you've caught all of that with this.
We haven't had hail in a while here. Lots of sleet though. Beautiful writing!
Great and very topical Claire.
I can feel it ... !
KaHolly: Warm and sunny sounds wonderful. Enjoy every minute of it! Glad you liked this one,
The Owl Wood: I am enjoying the challenge of the precise words that a haiku demands. Glad this one worked for you.
Lisa @ Two Bears Farm: Sleet is unpleasant too but at least hail leaves everywhere white for a while. Pleased you enjoyed this one.
Roy: Getting caught in is topical too!!
Vintage Jane: I am pleased I conveyed the way it was.
Do one for spring... I miss it so
John: I am so looking forward to Spring too.
It is non stop drizzle here.
CherryPie: The hail storms have passed now grey today and non stop rain forecast for tomorrow. I will stay inside warm, snug and dry.
It's like I feel the cold season on my skin when I read your lovely poem! :)
Luckily the sun is coming back soon to make the winter ground warm and green again.. :)
Thanks for your lovely comment! :)
Wish you a wonderful Sunday! :)
Viola: So pleased you liked the poem it did feel cold which was were the inspiration came from. :)
Very nice Haiku!
Wendy: Thanks.
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