Fog
is left outside.
Walking
home
late
last night
Fore
Street in the fog
front
doors softened
dense
mist embraces.
Enter my lane
gloaming now
light
blurred by diffusion
evening
softened
in
the chill
Fat
cat tiptoes by
dampness
fills my space
moisture
drips upon me
shut
the door behind
fog
is left outside.
28 comments:
very nice, the softness of the fog was easy to imagine
It must be that time of year!! At home, I love the fog from the ocean. My driveway circles around the back of my house and when we are banked in fog, it gives the illusion of being in the bottom of a bowl.
Out on the prairie: Thank you.
KaHolly: It is the third day of this fog,the valley is dense with the visibility really poor. Your fog sounds prettier than mine!
Very nicely evokes a soft soggy damp cold fog rather than a nervous or worrying one (to me, anyway)!
I love fog... so long as I don't have to drive.
Keep 'em coming please!
Kind of made me shiver a bit ;-)
The Owl Wood: It continues to be cold and foggy while there is sun somewhere else! I am not keen on day after day fog which is what we have here just now.
Lisa @ Two Bears Farm: It was and still is a cold wet fog!
Fog is always best viewed from inside.
CherryPie: Most definitely..
Snow is left outside here.
Thankfully.
We got another 3" today.
I am very very tired of snow.
The end.
fog, a misterious lane and a cat- speaks to my imagination
Life and travelling
Cooking
Ina in Alaska: I think winter weather should generally be left outside. How much snow do you get in one winter?
Ola: So glad your imagination was thinking of this. We have fog again today.
Beautiful, Cuby... As you know if you have looked at many of my photos, we love fog --and taking fog pictures...
We are having summer-like weather here this week... Lots of our spring flowers are blooming..
Hugs,
Betsy
Betsy from Tennessee: This fog is going on day after day, now 5 days of the cold damp stuff! Unimpressed!
You have such a gift. Your writing transports me. I have never enjoyed poetry as much I enjoy yours!
Mitch Block: This is praise indeed, thank you so much.
Another lovely poem with vivid descriptions so that I can picture the scene.
I love fog, and your poem brings it home nicely.
Al: I am not enjoying this fog as it is cold and very wetting! I like for which swirls!
Welshcakes: Thank you for these comments and I hope you enjoyed your picture.
The best bit is when you get home and the fog is left behind. It feels so safe and cosy.
Doris: Not just safe but warm as well.
I like your poem.
momto8: Thank you for visiting, glad you liked this poem.
I think you have successfully captured the fog here!. Quite atmospheric.
Yvonne: Thank you for this, I value your words.
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