between
trees
sun
shines
breeze
blows
through
copse
new
young leaves
between
trees
shadow
flickers
sunlight
flirts
coquettishly
zephyr
wavers
foliage
shimmers
transient
sunbeam
pianissimo
touch
magical
air
faeries
touch
spectral
moments
perception
extraordinaire
cloud
blanket
obliterates
fantasy
world
between
trees
34 comments:
nice, light atmosphere of the poem makes me feel like during a visit in this place
Life and travelling
Cooking
Ola: It felt magical the way the sunlight was playing.
Very nice poem. the creatures in the 1st shot of my last post aare American Bison, or Buffalo.The white one is a special treat.
Beautiful!
Our family loves olives, by the way. Particularly green ones, but we like black too!
Thanks for sharing your 'spectral moments'...
Out on the prairie:I have only seen bison in the zoo and they were black!
So pleased you liked this poem.
Lisa @ Two Bears Farm: Thank you so much.
Mitchell is moving: So pleased to be able to share this.
Lovely, Cuby. Once again, I can see it all!
What a truly lovely, escapist picture, Poet. The images are so intense and then over in an instant. It reminds me of eating a chocolate bar! Well done!
Doris: I had never equated this experience with consuming a chocolate bar so gives me thought to ponder! So glad that you liked this poem. Thanks you for your comments.
Welshcakes: So pleased that you could visualise all this and as always thanks for commenting.
How lovely! This is a very visual poem.I really like it and have read it four times and will do so again after writing this comment.
I have also just read 'Three Little Girls' and enjoyed that too, it really conveyed a hot, sunny day at the seaside and perfectly sums up the 'tears before bedtime' experience which I'm sure many of us remember from our own childhood.
I thought I had commented on 'beneath the granite headstones' I certainly read it and have just re- read it, a very moving poem!
Nice poem... I love sitting on the deck watching our big shade trees blow in the breeze... It's neat also seeing that happen when the sun is peaking through... Love it!!!!
Have a great day.
Hugs,
Betsy
ShySongbird: Really pleased that this worked so well for you. Thank you too for the comments n the other poems.:)
Betsy from Tennessee: This was such a lovely time, minutes, when the light was just wonderful. So glad you like it.
Hi Cuby, a lovely poem and very fitting for my scene outside right now. The leaves are appearing on the trees and I can see the sunlight filtering thru the tree limbs. Lovely writing!
A beautiful spring forest. I'm glad we don't see many of those clouds :)
eileeninmd: This scene is the same all over the world in deciduous woods everywhere but only where sun and breeze play together. Thanks for your commet.
Al: Your comment sums it up, thanks.
It sounds idyllic :-)
CherryPie: It was rather lovely.
Breath of spring and your pleasure in the season's awakening drawn for us to share. Lovely :-)
Lady M: I think that writing is for sharing (mine certainly is)and I am pleased when my poetry is met with such positive appreciation. Thanks. :)
Through these words I see the fairies. :))
very atmospheric poem!
EG CameraGirl: and I thought they were just in my imagination!!
Crafty Green Poet: I am so pleased the atmosphere came through. Thanks.
I have always loved the word "coquettishly."
Maria: It was a great opportunity to use the 'coquettishly' which is such a great word to roll around your mouth!
Its lovely Claire, but not very topical.{:))
If you are getting as much rain as we are anyway.
I think you've captured movement and atmosphere well here. I like " sunlight flirts coquettishly" very much...the sun is such a tease nowadays! and the use of the word " zephyr" immediately afterwards continues the use of personification well. Your last words " cloud ... trees" place the scene in reality.
Roy: This was a rare sunny afternoon in between the wet days which have been the usual form recently. Thanks for reading this poem. So pleased you liked it.
Yvonne: Thanks for your considered comments. Glad you liked it.
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