Field on the edge of Bodmin Moor
Spring
is all around
on
Bodmin Moor
new
life abounds
with
this green floor
new
grass is strong
green
blades will just arise
cropped
surface never long
fresh
growth before my eye
field
unblemished green
lawn
tennis court of old
perfection
rarely seen
no
undulations to behold
ewes,
lambs quietly graze
bleating
music fills the air
on
this glorious of days
these
creatures without care
fleece
caught by the wire
out
of sight and over brow
melodious
hidden choir
Spring
perfection now
27 comments:
Wonderful, I particularly love "bleating music fills the air"... describes it perfectly.
Elaine: Great comment, thanks. Really pleased that you liked it.
reading this poem I have a stron feeling of light-heartednes and hapiness
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Very nice thoughts, i like the fleece on the fence.Perhaps the grass looked better on the other side.
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Ola: I was really happy perhaps it came through in my words.
Out on the prairie: Thanks for all these comments, so pleased you liked this one.
Fleece caught by the wire - what perfect inspiration for poetry!
Lisa @ Two Bears Farm: The fleece and the bleating all combined to get my mind working on this poem. Inspiration it most definitely was.
What a very lovely spring poem!:)
I wish I cuold make poems like you..
In fact I was looking for a poem to my post tonight, but no - my thoughts and head both refused me.. I couldn't make up any.. and nor find any in the poem books I'm having..
Happy Easter to you! :)
What gentle thoughts. The fleece on the fence is a revelation for me since I don't know much about sheep. Wonderful image.
Evlyn: The fleece gave me the inspiration for this poem. Really pleased you enjoyed this one.
Viola: Great that you enjoy my poetry.
Very musical and very 'spring'like. We had snow here two days ago!
Lovely poem, Cuby! I can see the cute lambs on the field. The fleece might come in handy for some bird to grab it for its nest. Have a great weekend and Happy Easter!
Doris: It was a wonderful moment or two.
eileeninmd: Thanks for reading and commenting here.
A beautifully composed shot - and poem.
Linda; Thanks for your comments.
It sounds a perfect place to go walking.
CherryPie: It certainly is/was!
You've captured it. Thanks for helping me develop a love for poetry!
Crafty Green Poet: Thanks.
Mitchell is Moving: So pleased you were able to be there too! What a responsibility enabling you to realise the joy of poetry! I will just keep writing.
Thank you so much for visiting my blog recently :-)
What a lovely part of the world you live in and it sounds like the view from your desk is wonderful too. I'm sure it all gives you much inspiration for your lovely poems. The photo and poem on this post are beautifully matched.
ShySongbird: Welcome here. I am so pleased you like this poem and photo.
Lovely and very relevant Claire.
Roy: Thanks for reading this one and leaving comments.
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