Welcome to my blog. I am Cuby, I hope you enjoy everything you see and read here.
Everything appearing here is my own work written or photographed in Cornwall where the beautiful landscape continues to inspire me.
So swift :-)
Lsdy M: Hee hee!
I came to a community of them under a bridge a few days ago and really enjoyed their flight.
How timely. I sat by the river yesterday right next to a bridge and watched them do just that!
Out on the prairie: They are one of the delights of the summer.
Mitchell is moving: This seemed to be a way of describing their flight pattern. It sounds as if it worked for you!
I love watching the birds flying and diving, it's something we see a lot of here. Excellent verbal representation!
Al: Thank you.
Swallows, weavers in the sky. Love this poem, and love that ending!!!
A delightful description :-)
Lovely. And now that I think of it, your words are very true!
Denise: I love that you loved this one.
CherryPie: Thank you.:)
E G CameraGirl: Once the idea lodged in my brain I can no longer watch them without thinking of this imagined purpose.
swallows really are so lovely to watch
Cuby, what a lovely poem. I can see the swallows flying all around me. Have a wonderful day.
Lovely -- we have many that fly in the evening -- gathering bugs. Hope you get your sunshine soon. :)
lovely metaphor here; reminiscent of Hughes' Work and Play.
Crafty Green Poet: Oh but how do they cope with this wet, wet weather?
eileeninmd: Thanks for your thoughts.
Nancy Claeys: They are so beautiful in the sky so to share my words and have them enjoyed is pleasurable. Thanks.
Yvonne: This metaphor seemed the best description I could find. Off to seek 'Work and play' don't know it. Thanks for your comments.
I LOVE the weavers in the sky line! So beautiful.
Beautifully descriptive! There is nothing nicer than sitting in the garden on a warm, sunny day watching them do just that. That was when we used to have warm, sunny days of course :-(
Wonderful visuals! I wonder if their resultant 'cloth' pattern could be recorded? Imagine!Thanks for this!
Lisa@ Two Bears Farm: Thank you and am glad you found this poem beautiful.
Jim : I imagine the cloth to be beautiful colours and as light as chiffon.
ShySongbird: It is a pleasure for everyone, thanks for your comments.
Just like the swallows out our way. Lovely poem.
Jenny: Thanks for reading this and confirming that swallows are beautiful everywhere.
Truly lovely description.
Welshcakes: Thank you so much.
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