winter
wood
this
winter wood
sculptures
immobile
melange
of grey
then
aggressive spikes
holly
bush green
branches
stretch
out
in
winter wood
trees
stand amongst
dead
leaves
at
end of year
stand
together
ghostly
quiet
suddenly
electric
flash of blue
Jay alights
on
horizontal
arm
activity
sparse
motionless
dull
wings fly
neon
flash of blue
winter
wood
sleeps
on
23 comments:
Beautiful poem! and so many words I never heard of before.. (I'm not hundred procent good in English.. but I hope I can do myself understandable)
Yes Autum is here, naked branches streching out. leaves on the ground.
and we are waiting for colder days now.. but yesterday it felt like Spring.. :)
captures the onset of winter perfectly!x
Viola: Thank you for these nice comments and to say your English seems good and hope these new words add to your English vocabulary.
It's a odd mix this time of year. Dull, grey, cold and wet and yet the colours that there are assume an intensity not seen in springtime or summer. I love the way the trees are all either sneezing (and scattering leaves) or trying to dance in the wind.
Ah, I feel I am standing alone in the woods with a jay.
The Owl Wood: The air was still so no movement except the Jay which was so special.
E G CameraGirl: So pleased you could share this.
John Gray: Your words are really appreciated. Thanks.
Lovely evocation of winter, Cuby.
Getting ready for hibernation maybe.
Beautifully said. Thanks for sharing.
I like the way the colours leap out of this poem,
Welshcakes; What a lovely comment, thank you.
Jim; This bright flash certainly got my attention.
Crafty Green Poet: So pleased they leapt out at you as they did for me in the wood.
Beautiful descriptions!
A lovely description of a winter wood.
Lisa@ Two Bears Farm: Thank you.
CherryPie: In a dull light a winter wood can look so harsh. Thank you.
Beautiful evocative poem.
Vintage Jane: Thank you for this nice comment.
Love the idea of a neon flash in the sleeping forest... quite fairy tale like.
Jenny Woolf: The shy jay made the whole wood lighter even for the few moments it was there.
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